Sarah Greenwall

Name: Greenwall, Sarah

Nickname: N/A

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Appearance: (Usual Outfit)Long dark brown hair that are usually in pig tails and come down to about around her hips. Usually wears a black and blue hat that says “Be A Hero” on the front. Has brown eyes that are most of the time covered by her bangs. She wears her blue jacket pretty much everywhere no matter what. Usually has on a blue back pack to carry her skateboard when not using it. Under her jacket she wears a dark colored tank top (like black or grey). Sometimes she wears black gloves but when not she keeps them in her pale blue boot cut jeans. Also she always uses black fingernail polish on her finger nails to keep them the same color black she always has on them. She usually wears boots or regular black and white causal shoes, but never anything dressy. Finally her skin is pale and doesn’t have any marks on it besides a scar on her stomach right above her hip and on her forehead. Sarah is 5’3” and looks very skinny and her body structure is usually described as little kid like.

Spoiler:

Personality: Sarah is goofy, weird obsessed about heroes, knights, and basically a bunch of other nerdy stuff. She’s also very stubborn. She isn’t really good at neither following orders nor working on a team. Notices some things that others don't and gets annoyed when others don't notice it. It’s afraid to speak the truth no matter how much trouble she may get in. Sarah has A.D.D (Attention Deficit Disorder) so she finds it hard to focus on some things sometimes

Likes: To play the guitar, Draw pictures of people, cook, skateboard, play some video games, lollipops and other sugary things, the color blue, black fingernail polish, Comic books, most cheesy jokes, knights/archers/wizards/etc., saying random things to confuse others, fighting Hollows especially to get out of school.

Dislikes: Bugs, the dark, heights, her annoying older brother, being told what to do, when people pull the sympathy card on others, when she notices something and tries to point it out but others don’t see it (like random spirits that she sees ad her friends don’t)

Special Characteristics: Great chef, near pro level skateboarder, can draw people almost exactly the way they look, how to confuse people by saying random things(usually does this to get away without having to explain where she’s going.)

Class: High-Class

History: Ever since Sarah was born she could see things most people don’t like ghosts and other supernatural things like that. Like her older brother Jonathan (Or the name he won’t hit you for calling him, John) got their abilities from their parents and their parents from theirs and so on and so forth. Everyone in Sarah’s family has or had the potential to gain superhuman abilities, but only Sarah had the ability to bring it out so far.

Sarah has always been a very hot headed strange little kid and even made her parents get her private teachers for guitar, Mixed Martial arts, Acrobatics, and Sword fighting. She did this because she was totally obsessed with Paramore a very popular band, Knights and mid evil stuff, and last but not least Dragon Ball Z. When Sarah wasn’t in her lessons or in school she’d spend time with her mom cooking making her an excellent chef.

Sarah’s Brother John was always annoyed with how much attention she got so he often picked on her at home and ignored her at school. Sarah didn’t mind the school thing but she often made the picking on her a big deal to get him in trouble just to get back at him. Around the age of 11 a Hollow picked up on her family’s spiritual pressure. The Hollow attacked Sarah’s family (mom dad and brother) and as the Hollow went for the killing blow (that included Sarah) Sarah activated her super human abilities and saved her family. Afterwards Sarah figured it was all just a dream as so did her family.

Once after that things went back to normal for a year but the numbers of spirits that found their way to Sarah and her family seeking help getting over to “The other side” increased. When Sarah hit 12 years old she encountered her second Hollow. After this she put her two Hollow encounters side by side and learned her last encounter wasn’t just a dream. Shortly after that more Hollows appeared more often in their little town. Sarah then used her superhuman abilities to destroy them and protect the city.

Sarah continued to fight hollows for many more years up until one day she saw her brother sprinting back home and saw him run past her as she was coming out of a grocery store. Two Hollows follow and ran after him as Sarah follows Jon to see what was going on. When she asked him why the monsters behind them were chasing him he said that he didn’t know why but they had killed their grandparents.

Once he told her what they did they were outside their house and their parents were outside. Sarah’s eyes welded up with tears and she activated her super human abilities. Sarah destroyed the Hollows and afterwards she got her parents to let them move to keep the people of their home town safe from the Hollows. They ended up in another small town named Karakura that too was infested with Hollows.

Sarah currently now takes down these Hollows and protects the innocent spirits and people from them. Sarah after many years of use super human abilities are now almost at the level of a captain but still not there yet still leaving her at the non-elite rank. Even after all these years Sarah still doesn’t know what these Hollows are or anything else like them are so she simply calls the Hollows monsters.

RP Sample:
Sarah wears a school uniform and sees a Hollow outside and looks to the teacher. ”Can I be excused?!” The teacher narrows her eyes. ”Were in the middle of class and-“ Sarah stands up narrowing her eyes frowning ”Taco!” The teacher seems confused looking at Sarah raising an eyebrow as the class looks to Sarah laughing a little.

”I beg your-“ Sarah doesn’t even wait for the teacher to finish her sentence as she yells. ”MOO!” The teacher looks confused and shocked and stays silent not knowing what to even say as Sarah continues. ”May I be excused mam?” The teacher slowly nods her head not really know what just happened as Sarah smirks and the rest of the class hold in laughter from Sarah’s randomness. Sarah then runs out of the room muttering to herself when out of ear range of the teacher “Works every time!”

Sara makes it out of site of the school as she says “Come forth and fight for me once more. I summon the, Keyzoonto!” and her armor for her arm and her super large sword appears. Sarah then jumps high into the air and runs in midair very fast over to the area of where the Hollow is and smirks. Sarah jumps and front flips falling down at the Hollow yelling making it look up at her as it screeches. Sarah’s smirk turns into a full on smile as she slashes down ward as she falls cutting the Hollow in half vertically.

As Sarah lands to the ground gently the hollow disappears. Sarah puts one hand on her hip resting the large sword on her shoulder smiling widely. ”I swear it gets easier and they get dumber every time!” she says as she notices a little boy with a chain on his chest who was most likely chased here by the hollow and walks over to him as her armor and sword disappears.

Sarah ends down smiling at him. ”Don’t worry kid that big old monster won’t hurt you anymore. So now you can cross over worry free!” then boy frowns as his eyes tear up looking at her. ”But I’m scared.” Sarah kneels down and places a hand on the kids shoulder. ”Don’t be I saw many spirits cross over before and not one has come back to complain so I’m sure it can’t be too bad over here and besides its better than over here. There are no mean monsters over there.”

The boy smiles as he glows brightly and disappears leaving a butterfly behind him. Sarah slowly stands up putting her hands on her hips smiling watching the butterfly fly away. ”Man I really don’t want to have to go back to school……” She sighs putting her hands behind her head and walks back to school ”Guess I’ll just go as slow as possible than!”

First thing I see needing to be done is describing your character's height and body build. You've listed "Hates people/ when people pull the sympathy card." in both your Personality and Dislikes. Take it out of your Personality. There is no "almost Elite". Either you are, or you aren't. I feel the need to point out that they are spelled "Hollows", not "Hallows". Your RP Sample is an example of how you would post in the forum. The way it's written right now seems more like a story being told, not an RP Sample, please reformat it. Finally, there's a lot of grammatical inconsistencies and punctual errors. After making the necessary changes, please read through your application carefully to correct any errors in your grammar that may still be there.

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