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Post by Guest on Fri May 01, 2009 5:08 pm


Character Name:Ketsui

Age: 169 appears to be a 14 year old

Gender: Male


Personality: Ketsui is generally mature and serious. Ketsui is shown to be easily annoyed by others goofing off or drawing unneeded attention to themselves. Ketsui hates anything that he deems childish and hates being described as something close to a child, an elementary school child for example, a further contrast to his appearance.

He is very determined, and demanding. Ketsui likes to do everything in his way. Ketsui has a very bad temper if anyone gets in his way, he will make sure that they won't do it again. Outside of the obvious cracks about how young he looks/is the other things that really send him over the deep end quickly is when he sees guys picking on girls.

Sometimes Ketsui gets lost in his thoughts and occasionally wishes that he can change the past.

Mask duration is limited to 10 posts, after that it will fade. It is possible to use your mask more than once. For example; after your mask fades, you go without it for two posts, you are able to reuse it and it will hold for two posts.


Zanpakuto Information:

Unreleased looks: (If its' unreleased looks are normal just type Standard Issue Zanpakuto)

Zanpakuto Type: Fire and Wind


Shikai Name:Tokoyonokuni

Chant: Rise from the Ashes

Shikai Looks:

Shikai Abilities:

Katon Hosenka

Effect: The user blasts a myraid of fireballs.

Katon Karyu Endan

Effects: A powerful flamethrower. The user blasts a nine foot long flame from their mouths.

Katon Kanatsu

Effects: The most powerful version of Katon Gokakyu. While the fireball created is the same, this fireball is capable of exploding violently. The user may encure damage as well during the explosion, if they are not at least ten feet away from it when it explodes.

Katon Shoten Kaen Tama

Effects: The user creates a focused orb of flame, that while not big in size, is extremely fast and can cause some serious damage against a target.

Spirit: A phoenix (a mythical bird with a tail of beautiful gold and red plumage.) The bird was also said to regenerate when hurt or wounded by a foe, thus being almost immortal and invincible it is also said that it can heal a person with a tear from its eyes and make them temporarily immune to death. The phoenix is a symbol of fire and divinity.


Bankai Name: Kami no Chi

Bankai Description:

The only ability Tokoyonokuni gives Ketsui, it is both effective and powerful. This ability can only be used once by Ketsui, since it takes both a lot of reiatsu, and also requires some of his enemies blood. Ketsui will shout out the name of this ability and begin to have his red reiatsu aura flare into existence around him. He extends Tokoyonokuni in front of him and all the blood, his or his foes, in a large radius around him is sucked into his blade, whether it be coming from his wounds, his enemies wounds, or puddles on the ground. Then, when he has gathered it all, he reverses the blade and stabs himself in the chest.

The blade, now enhanced with her reiatsu, proceeds to go into his body and heal his wounds, while also revitalizing him a little, recovering some of his strength. Due to its cost, and the fact it uses up some of the blood in a wide radius, it is an attack that Ketsui only uses when he needs to break a stalemate or defeat an opponent, and has no choice but to go all out. It is one of his last resort ability's, which he uses at the climax of a battle to ensure his victory, horrify his opponent and also show them that their strength is meaningless, for he has recovered and is capable of finishing them off now. If enough blood is spilled again, he can use his techniques again but this one is a one-time use only.

Bankai Looks: N/A

This is where passive traits, kido, and release abilities go

Name: Fuuton Rendan no Gufuu /release ability)

Description:Creates a small tornado that spins at a very high speed, and destroying small pieces of the ground while moving towards the enemy. The enemy will then suffer inside the tornado if he is caught, being cut in all over the
This wind spiral when launched the opponent, is a big danger, because the wind starts to spoil the soil leading rocks and everything what to oppose him in its way. The user can order the spiral to go in a straight line or then to control it of free will. Requires Fan or some other wind enhancing weapon.

Name: Fuuton Dai Kamaitachi/release ability

Description:The name of this technique comes from a very powerful mythological creature. It is the advanced version of Kamaitachi. The user sends a great amount of wind in spiral against the opponent. These winds are so powerful that they are capable to cut trees with much easiness, capable to cutting trees in few seconds. Requires Fan or some other wind enhancing weapon.

Fuuto Mugen Saijin Daitoppa/trait

Description:One technique where the user inhales a great amount of air and when exhales it, like if it was a air cannon. A great air ball goes off that rises up dust and rock, and hitting the opponent with a tremendous pressure.

Kaze No Yaiba/trait

Description:a cutting whirlwind will envelop the Phoenix wing something that they can use against an opponent. Unlike a real sword which can face resistance, the wind blade will be able to slice with little difficulty.


Name: Cero
Type: Hadou
Description: It consists of firing a blast of concentrated spirit energy at the target. While in most cases it is fired from the mouth, some Arrancar and Vizard are capable of firing Cero from their hands, fingers and other parts of their bodies.

Name: Restrain
Number: 1
Description: Locks a target's arms in place behind their back.

Name: Crawling rope
Number: 4
Description: An energy rope entangles a target's arms.

Name: Summoning of the Tracking Sparrows
Number: 58
Incantation: Heart of the south, eye of the north, finger of the west, foot of the east, arrive with the wind and depart with the rain.
Description: Tracks and locates any spiritual force the user focuses on. To activate it, the user must draw a circle on the ground, cut into four parts with a specific character in each. The incantation animates the circle, causing various numbers to appear within until the specific set is found. The number set seems to be a variation on longitude and latitude.

Name: Orb of Heavenly Fury
Number: 87
Incantation: two lords descend. Lighting strikes the whirling wind flames rise upon the ascending lotus the lotus illuminates an unforgiving world
Description: The target is surrounded by an orb of golden light and everything inside the orb including the air is destroyed in a blast of light. a momentary whilwind is creted afterwords as the air rushes back in to fill the space.

Name: Blue Fire, Crash Down
Number: 33
Incantation: Ye Lord! Mask of flesh and bone, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, Upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws!
Description: Fires a burst of blue spiritual energy at a target in a similar manner to 31, but over a wider area and with more power.

Name: Abolishing Flames
Number: 54
Description: Fires a blast of purple spiritual energy that will incinerate a target completely when it makes contact.

Name: Shot of Red Fire
Number: 31
Incantation: Ye Lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, The sea barrier surges, March on to the south!
Description: Fires a ball of red energy at a target.

Name: Quintet of 1 kan Iron Pillars
Number: 75
Incantation: Walls of ironsand, a priestly pagoda, glowing ironclad fireflies. Standing upright, silent to the end.
Description: Summons five incredibly tall and thick pillars to pin a target to the ground.

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Re: Ketsui FINISHED!!

Post by Guest on Fri May 01, 2009 5:10 pm


Biography: Child Arc
Ketsui was born in district 70 of south Rukon as an only child to a couple of reletively well off individuals for the district. he spent the first chunk of his life there with his parents happily though around the time that he appeared 10 it all changed. His house caught fire while he slept. the people in the area frantically rushed to put out the fire so that it wouldn't spread to their houses. The fire finally died down in the morning leaving nothing of the house and its inhabitants but ash as far as they knew though just as they started to walk away Ketsui sat up unharmed as if the fire had never happened. They looked at him with faces full of shock and no one would approach him since that day.

During his time of loneliness when even the other orphans who had nothing but camaraderie with others of their own age to keep themselves alive would not approach him or let him get closer than was avoidable he started to become more and more like a feral animal and his appearance just made everything worse. He stole food to keep himself alive and to keep his unknown hunger for food at bay. Around the time that he appeared to be 13 he saw a woman on the street at a vendor buying rock candy and decided to wait until she had removed it from the table and then run up and steal it from her. He approached her quietly and cautiously like a cat stalking his prey and as she removed the bag of candy from the table he went in for his plan but as she turned and looked at him something about her eyes stopped him in his tracks. She looked at him and unlike everyone else she did not seem afraid like everyone else seemed to be she appeared almost motherly. She offered him to come with her to her house he agreed almost instantly and his feral appearance melted away just before he said yes.

Ketsui now lives in the 1st district of South Rukon in a fancy home with the woman who went by the name of Auntie she had adopted two other children before Ketsui one of them was an older boy who appeared almost 15 and the other was a younger girl who appeared almost 10. One of Aunties servants had a daughter the same age as the older boy. Her name was Yomiko and no matter how hard Ketsui's new older brother tried he could not get her to notice him. She did seem to care about Ketsui though which did nothing but cause Ketsui's older brother to start trouble with Ketsui.

After living in the house for a couple of years Ketsui had finally put the past behind himself as well as the blame that he kept putting on himself for the burning of his last home. While he was sleeping one night his bedding and the wood around where he slept started to smoke and suddenly Yomiko burst into the room and woke him up. He looked at her shocked at the fear in her eyes that covered up there normal gentle appearance. He sat up and had her explain what had happened. When she did she also had to admit that she watched him sleep trying to build up the courage to tell him how she felt or even better yet showed him. While she was explaining what happened he notice that she was flexing her hands he moved over to his desk and lit a candle he saw that the palms of her hands were burned, then he looked over to where he laid then back to her hands she promised to see the doctor first thing in the morning.

The next night Ketsui went to bed just like normal but was too afraid to go to sleep and after what had happened last night. After a couple of hours of laying there in quiet he got up and went to his desk calling out to the hall for Yomiko to come in. It was then that they talked about what happened with Ketsui and along as the fact that whenever Yomiko would start to sleep she would hear a males voice calling out to her. They decided to go to the Shinigami academy first light to fill out the applications before the new semester started.

Academy Arc

Ketsui and Yomiko filled out the applications in secret from their respective parents not wanting to let them know that they were going to become shinigami in fear that they would not approve of the dangerous life styles that they were chosing for themselves. Yet no matter how well they kept from acting out of the ordinary both Auntie and Yomiko's Mother suspected something was up and the day before the term started they had confronted Ketsui and Yomiko letting them know that they were okay with them being shinigami as long as they stopped in every now and again.

During the entrance exams Ketsui felt over pressured and kind of bombing them passing them but just barely though with his natural abilities he was moved up to the advanced where Yomiko was placed before First term had even ended. During the Konso and Hollow slaying practice sessions Ketsui and Yomiko were always paired up their skills complimenting eachothers perfectly and their past with eachother gave the both of them the ability to watch the other for weaknesses.

Ketsui was about second or third in his class depending on who you asked because he tied with Yomiko through out their entire time at the academy.

In their final Year the Captain of 10th division recruited Ketsui and Yomiko and gave them position for immediate transfer at the end of the week following graduation,

Shinigami Arc

One week after graduation Ketsui reported to the squad 10 captain as he was supposed to. The former captain greeted him and instructed him in the rules of the barracks, squad 10's training facility, as well as rules that apply to all members of the squad no matter where they were. The rules were simple mostly referred to keeping appearances tidy and actions mature so that the squad doesn't get a bad reputation. After the former captain was done instructing Ketsui on the rules he ordered the Lieutenant to give him a tour of the squad as well as a tour of the fastest routes to the important locations within the Seireitei.

Captain Arc

About a two years after reaching Bankai Ketsui and Yomiko's Captain was promoted to Squad 10 and Ketsui was chosen to replace him. Ketsui's First act as a captain was to choose Yomiko as his lieutenant. During what little free time between Missions and paperwork they had Ketsui and Yomiko worked on mastering their Bankai's doing so in about a two more years.

A year after they mastered their Bankai squad 2's captain died and Ketsui suggested to the remaining Captains that Yomiko would be qualified enough to take the position. They agreed to it if Yomiko could pass a small test for them. She aced it and became squad 2's captain.

A year or so later Ketsui was speaking to Toyonokuni in his world and he heard a strange voice that he dismissed as just an echo or something similar.

Ketsui and Yomiko were assigned to retreive a shinigami who turned rogue what they found was not a Shinigami turned rogue but something else entirely. They found a Hollow whose energy was greater than that of a menos grande but was much smaller. It attacked Ketsui and Yomiko its speed greater than anything that they had encountered before They immediately went into their Bankai forms. They fought the thing and suddenly Ketsui started to burn just like he did when that hollow was trying to take control of him years ago though this time it was more intense. The burning was so intense that it caused Ketsui to lose conciousness for less than a second but the next thing that he knew he was in his Zanpakuto spirit realm where Tokoyonokuni was fighting something that looked like a lot like ketsui so much so Ketsui thought he was looking into a mirror to a parrallel universe.

Vizard Arc

Yomiko's inner hollow was more cooperative than Ketsui's and after Yomiko explained things to Ketsui they started working on extending the amount of time that Ketsui could use his mask for. At that time Ketsui and Yomiko didn't know whether or not there were others like them so they went into Isolation up in the mountains only coming out to kill any hollow that was in the area.

They lost track of the time they spent in the mountains but after what could have been decades they sensed an energy that was similar to theirs they came down from the mountains in search of it and what they saw was a couple of beings who were in white picking apart humans and a young man with striking orange hair slice one of their arms off.

It wasn't long after that they felt an energy similar energy again but this one was closer to theirs. It brought them to the city where they saw someone fighting that orange haired guy again and a blond person pull down a mask over his face holding a Zanpakuto.

Current Arc

They decided to follow the guy to his base where they were accepted more or less and they have been working with them since.



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