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Post by Saikero on Sat Nov 17, 2012 8:29 pm

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Name: Yagume Salvatore

Nickname:Sai-chi, Sally, Sal.

Age: 167 Years

Visual Age:Appears to be 21 When power limiter is intact. When the limiter is broken the restrained reiatsu leaves his body at his body changing to a much leaner state making him much faster.

Gender: Male

Appearance: He has short shaggy brown hair with one silver streak that runs down in front of his right eye. He wears a long trench coat that hides a very well defined body. One of the sleeves is torn off while the other is completely intact and is used to hide his dagger. He wears a crystal that is looped around his neck with a slim piece of leather. The crystal was designed for him by his sister to help him contain his high levels of reiatsu so that innocents will not come to harm. When the limiter is shattered and he enters the leaner form he removes the trench coat revealing a black tank top equipped with slight armor as well as his cow skin hide jeans. All of his weapons are revealed in this form the long odachi can be seen hanging perpendicular with his spine. His hair flows down to his shoulders and falls into his face hiding all forms of expression.

Personality: With the power limiter he is a fairly mild mannered young man who enjoys helping and teaching the younger Shinigami what he can. Though this is true he is also a very quiet person not being one to begin any conversation unless he has gotten to know the other to some degree. Without the limiter he become very curious and child like and will pester whoever he is around to gather information. He is also much more outgoing and will strike up conversations at random with different people though he is a lot more merciless in combat viewing it is a game rather than a life or death situation.

Likes: He enjoys meeting new people, listening to music, singing, sometimes dancing, and fighting.

Dislikes: He hates being forced into no win situations by his commanding officers, killing (the child like side prefers to beat someone within an inch of their life), people who cry tears when they are hurt in combat, those who boast about strength and have no real way of backing their claim up, and those who simply refuse to die an honorable death

Special Characteristics: Exceptionally skilled singer slash guitarist. When he has off time he frequents the world of the living simply to listen to music or go play a little himself in music stores. The limiter he wears is only capable of lowering him down to the power level of a lieutenant class shinigami though he is in desperate need of a stronger one.

Division: Has experience within the medical squad as a lieutenant and the 11th division as a captain. Though currently is inactive within the squads. (Unassigned)

Rank: Captain level though is currently unassigned to a squad.

History: He was one of the few individuals to be born within Soul Society. Growing up he was a rather good thief having been moved into the Zaraki district. One day he snagged a loaf of bread from a merchant he had taken things from on a constant basis. This time the man chased after him along with a soul reaper who attempted to use Bakudo to restrain him catching him with a Hainawa. Falling to the ground he glared up at the merchant as the man attacked him and began beating him to within an inch of his life. As soon as the soul reaper realized what was going to happen he moved to try and restrain the merchant. But as the lights began to fade the crystal around Salvatore's neck would be destroyed and the immense power being held within himself rushed out from his body weighing the merchant down and bringing him to his knees. Glaring at the man he began to tear through the Energy rope holding him and pounced on the merchant beating him until he was unconscious. The soul Reaper was in shock at the amount of power the child possessed and simply watched flabbergasted as the child rose up off of the merchant and turned his cold steely eyes on the Reaper. His sister would round the corner and witness the scene and walk over to the child and place a hand on his shoulder gently before reaching into his pocket and pulling out another crystal a back up she had made for him and wrapped it around his neck sealing away the power. His eyes return to their normal features as he watches the Soul Reaper and his body regained it's large size. The soul Reaper would introduce himself as ShunSui and offer Sal an opportunity to join the Shinigami to which Sal agreed. In a years time he had graduated from the academy and began his job as a third seat to the 4th division. In time he would prove his worth as a fighter by intervening in several catastrophes and coming out on top even though he returned with fairly decent injuries on two occasions the most infamous of which being a fight in which he faced down an Adjuchas-Class Menos as a fourth seat officer to the 4th squad. The Adjuchas-Class Menos had seemingly beaten him when it unleashed a Cero that left a hole through the young mans sword arm. When he finally unleashed his Shikai it was revealed that he could use his opposite arm just as well as his injured one and in one stroke he used the special maneuver Shizuku Tenjitsu to set the creature ablaze and burn it until nothing remained. Seeing the potential of the young man the head captain reassigned him to the 11th division where his infamy as a fighter began to grow when he had a grueling match with the Captain of the 11th division. In this fight they both pushed each other to the limits each shattering their limiters once they realized there was no other way either of them would win the fight. Off of an incredible stroke of luck he managed to over power the captain though both suffered mortal wounds. In order to decide which of the two would be the next 11th squad captain the members of the 11th squad refused to allow either of them to receive medical assistance until one had died. As it turned out Salvatore was the one with the strongest will to live clinging to the hope of being able to pull his sister out of the Zaraki district and to bring some honor to his home of thieves and criminals(The zaraki district is mostly comprised of these. When the former captain passed away and he received the proper treatment he would be offered the chance to take the captains exam to become the leader of the 11th division and he accepted passing the test with flying colors. As the years went by he became weary with all the fighting that was associated with his squad leading to his inevitable "retiring" from the squad. In truth he had simply grown so tired of it that on his next stent within the world of the living he simply never returned. Now he belongs to no squad living in the human world in the guise of a mortal to hide from the Gotei who have decided to either bring him back of his own free will as a captain or too drag him back as a prisoner to hold in the Maggot's Nest.


RP Sample: Walks into town his eyes shifting swiftly through the shadows searching for something. Hearing an ear splitting scream he jumps back as a hollow slams it's claws into the ground in front of him the nails just barely tearing away at the fabric of his clothing. "Man I have been getting lazy if that thing can hit me..." Ducking his head as a swipe comes at his head he bounds backwards on his heels dodging more strikes as they come at him. Swinging a wide right he connects with a Tessho technique to the jaw line of the creatures mask shattering it his hand puncturing straight through the vile creatures face. Drawing his hand back blood covering it completely the creatures body begins to disintegrate. Stretching he looks around searching for more hollows and sighs finding none. Moving back down the street of Karakura Salvatore would head to his house and remove the mod soul from his body before climbing back into it and heading up stairs for a training session with his Zanpakuto in his inner world.













Last edited by Saikero on Tue Nov 20, 2012 9:27 pm; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : It was strongly suggested by admin)

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Re: Correctly formatted Yagume Salvatore Application Editing process finished

Post by Tokuchi Toua on Sun Nov 18, 2012 3:57 pm

I don't understand how a limiter would have an effect on your looks, especially making you smaller when released. Explain its' exact effects in your special characteristics and either reverse it to where you're bigger when it's released, or remove it entirely. Also, your History lacks a lot of detail in the sense that there are no unique struggles or events on your way to being a Captain. And simply retiring as a Captain doesn't really happen. As you're a spiritual being from Soul Society, the Gotei would be after you in some fashion, whether to simply place you back home, or put you in the Maggot's Nest is up to you. All I ask is that you make your History more original. You could use a quick spelling, punctuation, and grammar check as well.

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Post by Tokuchi Toua on Wed Nov 21, 2012 1:04 am

Approved.

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